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Posted Sunday, September 28, 2008, at 1:52 PM
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The last week was really relaxed for me. Besides having a friend I met in San Pedro de Atacama visit me, everything was just life and school as normal. I do not have much to tell about, but I decided I would take this chance to share a few poems I have written recently.

Israel

Brown eyes of bubbles-

pop-pop-popping

every time conversation

picks up and dropping-

How can you be so

much like me,

but from a place I've

only seen on TV?

Backpacking Antofogasta

Drift to the coast

to watch the birds in the bay.

Watch the stray dogs

swim and play

Don`t know where

I`ll end up today-

this life is freedom

I like it this way.

A green planet

sparkling with dew drops

and broken glass.

A sea shell

echoing ocean- shell spirals

oil stained.

A river with

H20, elixer of life

like toxic waste.

The beach, wide

and bestrewn with

sheashells and garbage.

A lost shoe

under a dock goes

unmissed.

Train Tracks

Train pulls away

into the infinite gray

tunnel. And as it sways

side to side, gravity betrays

me and all these stops delay

me. But it will never cease to amaze

me the speed at which I will

surely arrive to my

desitination.


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Es tarde para el post, pero no podia perderme esto.

Mi favorita: Train Tracks.

En "A green planet", me gusto la frase: "A river with H20, elixir of life"... mmm.

La poesia es interesante forma de expresion. Me gusta que la escribas. No es mucha la gente que lo hace.

-- Posted by aferreir on Sun, Oct 19, 2008, at 8:45 PM


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Tara L. Brandenburg
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